New Material "The Storm" Unfinished

This is the half of a verse for a song called The Storm which I am currently writing to an instrumental of the same name by Snowgoons:

It’s become outrageous it’s like a plague-is, contagious I’m lit but the pages flame less, heinous-when fingers print in latent’s, dangerous-what I do with my cadence, range is-nothing short of spacious, I came with-everything so blame this, latest-on my own patience, cause fame is whack if I am not the greatest…

I had written this verse in an attempt to change the flow, which is show after the first two bars of the this eight bar piece. The " - " indicates a slight pause as to signify the change in flow from the first two bars where there are no pauses.

My thought process was that in which I could display the rhymes I had written and still have them be noticed. In this simple eight bar piece I kept the same rhymes throughout: outrageous, plague-is, contagious, pages, flame less, heinous, latents, dangerous, cadence, range-is, spacious, came-with, blame-this, patience, fame-is, greatest.

I had done this because I like to show my capabilities as a rhymer as well as put emphasis on the rhymes. In addition to this, I was also going for the change in flow, not only because it shows versatility but also because this would again emphasize the rhymes.